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A Poem I Made

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"Shimmering Sapphires"


Her eyes were like shimmering sapphires,

glowing uncontrollably in the sea.

Golden locks of hair, she could be a princess for all I could see.

Her nose tip was sharp, pointed towards the sky.

Like a sword raised for battle, soldiers are always ready to cry.

Such beauty can only be observed.

It shall never be accessed; however, a man can sit in thought

He can get lost and realize.

Nothing he will do will be enough.

Her eyes were like shimmering sapphires, glowing uncontrollably in the sea.
 

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English poems are so buns
But nice work
 

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English poems are so buns
But nice work
Alright the full poem is posted, yeah I like persian poems better
 

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Alright the full poem is posted, yeah I like persian poems better
Yeh both Persian and Arabic poems are light years better than any English poem
 

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nice
 

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:kim:
 

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"Shimmering Sapphires"


Her eyes were like shimmering sapphires,

glowing uncontrollably in the sea.

Golden locks of hair, she could be a princess for all I could see.

Her nose tip was sharp, pointed towards the sky.

Like a sword raised for battle, soldiers are always ready to cry.

Such beauty can only be observed.

It shall never be accessed; however, a man can sit in thought

He can get lost and realize.

Nothing he will do will be enough.

Her eyes were like shimmering sapphires, glowing uncontrollably in the sea.
those who came ✋
 
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Yeh both Persian and Arabic poems are light years better than any English poem
I used to know a girl who was half syrian, lowk she was poetic asf plus she was very nice i lowk fell in love with her, but idk where she is now...
 

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it\s bad delete it
no one is interested in reading about shimmering sapphires for eyes
 

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