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Discussion give me starters or topic suggestions for prose poems/vignettes similar to the one below (1 Viewer)

Discussion give me starters or topic suggestions for prose poems/vignettes similar to the one below

hatred&gasoline

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you turn to the right and see her,
Looking back at you with that irreplaceable love,
flooding you with a safety so alien to you,
it's right there in her eyes; she only wants you,
you feel a smile crawl onto your face,
you can't help leaning in for a ki-
your alarm shatters it,
3 months since she left,
3 months of seeing heaven in your sleep,
3 months of waking up to hell
 

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Nigga this ain’t no literature forum
 

hatred&gasoline

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Nigga this ain’t no literature forum
I like making looks centered poems and off topic is literally anything off topic so just dnr if you don’t like them iqlet
 

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I like making looks centered poems and off topic is literally anything off topic so just dnr if you don’t like them iqlet
Ok fe can u make one about a cuck (you) watching he’s future wife get obliterated
 

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